I won’t flatter myself into believing our criticism in particular was even noticed, let alone caused any revision or reconsideration, but it it at least nice to see that the incoming administration is capable of refining it’s message. We shall have to wait and see now whether not only the message but, more importantly, the actual intent has been modified, too.

That said, while I certainly have fewer objections to the revised language, I would still find the revised proposal objectionable for reasons discussed in the comments section of the post you linked.